And It Felt Like A Dream

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    And It Felt Like A Dream

    I was walking out one night by the sea
    And there was this guy and he noticed me
    He approached me then with his manly physic
    With beautiful eyes and a face so unique

    So he took me by the hand and he walked me to the shore
    Then he whispered in my ear and then he walked me up some more
    And we dove into the water and we swam the night away
    Then he lifted me out of the water and I didn’t know what to say

    Because I looked around and I saw this place, and I saw it very clear
    And I looked at him and he looked at me and then he pulled me near
    And he turned around and sat me down and he fingered through my hair
    I was so shy to speak; it was as if he wasn’t even there

    Then he moved us over to have a seat
    My god that man made me feel complete
    Then he touched me in ways I’ve never felt
    And my body went hot like it was going to melt

    I felt so happy and alive that night
    And then I awaken to the sun so bright
    And there he was with eyes so blue
    And then he whispered in my ear “man do I love you”

    Then I turned my head away and then I turned it back
    And man he was gone…didn’t know where he was at
    But still I felt something beautiful in me beam
    Then I felt his presence, and it felt like a dream


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    Amazon commented on And It Felt Like A Dream

    04-17-2009

    Nice rhyme!!

    nikkishaniqwa commented on And It Felt Like A Dream

    03-16-2009

    beautifully written!!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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