Anew

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Anew

I anticipate the long journey
and if all will go well
Or will we get a flat tire and it all go to hell
I am scared that I will not find a single job,
no work
And that in turn will put a strain on us and drive me berzerk!
I want to puke now or maybe just end it all
But I have to stay strong for us, for Kayla and never fall
Many of my friends have it worse than me
So I should be thankful and humble and have some humility
Maybe this is just a step or turn in the right direction
No matter what though I will go without any discretion
Almost like an adventure and letting the wind be my guide
But I will never go anywhere without Poof and Gotham by my side
So here I go again starting a new life
And one day hope to be Poof's little wife

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jademelissa74 commented on Anew

07-07-2009

This is a poem that can be easily appreciated. Richly poetic, vividly deep. Great Job Raven! I look forward to reading more of your work! Great Job!

cliftondurant commented on Anew

06-18-2009

This is sweet and nice keep on beleiving and thing will work out for you God always take care of his children good jod

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

RavenBridge’s Poems (18)

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Sparrows 0
Anxiety 0
Heart of Gold 1
Far Away Thinking 1
Net of Confusion 0
The Last Song 2
The Snake Called West 1
Essence of Ass 0
Enigma 0
West-We-Go 1
Top of my Head 0
Anew 2
White Memories 7
Poof 5
Black Angel 5
My Heartsblood 2
My Light 3