Angel above my bed!

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    Angel above my bed!

    I woke up early and stubled out of bed with my vision half blurred and these voices in my head hearing a delightful melody and some words that someone said "your lookin toward the future but you can't forget the past the mistake you have made haven't been paid for the unforgiven trash...In time you'll see what I mean as you walk away from the helpless and the unknown tomorrow has all been borrowed so dig down deep and don't you weep for a dollar is all it takes as you stand upon your thrown for nothing is free and this you'll see when it time to pay the toll...Many times you have asked for me and this I see as you slowly turn your head the table is turning a your soul slowly keeps burning for I am the angel abouve your bed..I am here to help you change your ways to help you pray God sent me to you at last. 

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    sharenhansen commented on Angel above my bed!

    12-31-2010

    excellent good luck in finding the right lady happy new year be safe

    Chaos128 commented on Angel above my bed!

    10-08-2009

    In “Angel above my bed!” I see a short, passionate stream of consciousness with a clear and urgent message. Your technique here has breathless immediacy, but remains coherent. My only criticism, T, is the typos (nothing is as subjective as poetry so it’s always possible that “typos” are deliberately applied to achieve a desired effect, but it just doesn’t seem that way here). Readers will be less likely to respect your efforts if it appears that you don’t respect it enough to compose it with care. Creativity is a positive force and I’m glad to see anyone partake of it. As with any activity, the more you practice, the better you get. In the end, though, the only one who can decide whether you got it right is you. I look forward to reading more of your work! -Chaos128-

    Tony5880

    10/08/2009

    Thank you your right i should of looked it over befor i put in mut of my poems i write late at night when i have time and i do respect my work i should have looked it over putting it in thank you tony 5880

    melanie23 commented on Angel above my bed!

    09-23-2009

    very well done. heartfelt. it was a very gd read. i look forward to more with this kind of depth from u n the future.

    Tony5880

    09/26/2009

    Thank you melanie I like all imput I am always looking to improve my writings

    ravenrose commented on Angel above my bed!

    09-23-2009

    its different. thats good. no one is to be alike. it was good

    Tony5880

    09/26/2009

    Thank you Raven I am looking to inprove on the next poem for depth thank you!

    HeroOfWriting commented on Angel above my bed!

    09-23-2009

    The past is history, the future is a mystery, but the present is a gift, hence it's name. But you can learn many things in history, to help better your future.

    Tony5880

    09/26/2009

    I am going to have to read yours I am always looking to inprove mine thanks

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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