Angelic Tones

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I enjoy vampires :)
So, it was only a matter of time until I wrote a poem about them.

Angelic Tones

A grinning, ageless being
Shrouded in complete mystery
Watching centuries of anguish
Taking place in all history

Seeking nothing more
With crystal, burning eyes
Lighting fires within human souls
Listening to their cries

Speaking words that float like feathers
Making every leg go weak
Taking advantage of such fascination
Where no one can even speak

They'll take their beautiful faces
And plant them in your head
Spreading feelings of pure admiration
That lay you and your dreams to bed

Eyes, black with obscurity
And faces as white as snow
Hold your face with freazing hands
And cease to let go

They'll drain your senseless body
To the point of certain death
Speaking to you in an angelic tone
As you take your last breath

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redbloodink commented on Angelic Tones

01-01-2010

omg This was off the chain thanx.... red

biteme commented on Angelic Tones

09-05-2009

this is great the mental visions just fill my head and the flow is wonderfull, and the concept of it is enjoyable on levels. keep it up

LieToMeHonestly commented on Angelic Tones

09-04-2009

yummy. vampires. once again, you have written an absolouteleh lurvehleh poem. it's tingly.

chucky1982 commented on Angelic Tones

08-31-2009

that was great. i write dark poetry mostly and mostly about vampires so bravo it was a work of art

Milkman commented on Angelic Tones

08-29-2009

a nice piece of death, good imagery very visual piece

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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