ANOTHER DAY

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    ANOTHER DAY

    ANOTHER DAY




    When the moon starts to melt
    when the sun starts to glow
    My soul hides under a blanket
    Not willing to go

    I convince my caitiff soul
    The tears start to flow

    This day would be good
    as I promise my soul
    But deep beneath I know
    This day has another blow
    For my caitiff soul
    Which is not willing to go

    I walk on the streets which were never friendly
    With my head facing down
    my eyes half shut ,trying to avoid the clown

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    exclusivelye commented on ANOTHER DAY

    07-21-2009

    I love your poem. Sadness, the emotion it evokes.

    exclusivelye commented on ANOTHER DAY

    07-21-2009

    Wow. I'm truly sorry for your seemingly dreadful life.

    drewking commented on ANOTHER DAY

    01-23-2009

    nice!! love the last verse..

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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