Another Promise

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    Another Promise
    i bet
    its another promise- another promise i cant keep
    i shy away as they smolder your eyes
    with venom vomit and victory uncapable eyes
    " on the hearts i won a few arms n masks
    at the same time they drew blood from america
    when anything is too pretty- its so easy to rebel!
    my pieced lips- death disarming my smile
    I bet i made a few of you feel fear for samewhat of a time!"
    Its another promise i cant keep- ill never be better off than what they made me
    a pulsating heartbeat- withouy any craving for what you folks describe as natural normanlty

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    jademelissa74 commented on Another Promise

    08-12-2009

    You speak with so much heart. You express your feelings very well. I love the passion in which you wrote this piece. Great job! You are a talented poet.
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