Another Reality

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OK, OK so maybe I was just a little blind with this one, that is why they say love is blind, lol. As with most things in life I hard to learn it the hard way...

Another Reality

Destiny so brings us together,
And the cruelty of the world so sets us apart.

He slips slowly out of the humble evil dwelling of the world,
And he sets my heart afire,
And I lie sizzling at the opening of a new door.

I run sprinting back into the mottled darkness of my soul,
And I fall into an eternal hole.

I have seen the horrid sight of the Devil himself,
He dwells within my world,
He lies lost,
Forever seeking me at any cost,
But I did out in a dust cave,
And my future I strive to save,
In my actions I rant and I rave.

In this cave we lie in two,
Me and my soul,
My soul and you,
You are high,
And I am lost in an endless sigh.

Out of the scarring pain and sobbing rain,
A glimmer of purity in the world sets abroad,
And the Devil gives me a nod,
For he knows the future and past,
Foe he knows he can reach me at last.

The sandman casts his part in time,
In a blending song and rhyme,
Just fine I say,
Cast you sleep upon me I say,
Let me drift off to sleep into an eternal bliss,
And not awaken until your kiss,
For time now waits for us,
On a mountain of pain and puss.

The Devil retreats into hell with his tail between his legs,
And he cries,
He cries and he begs,
The Devil has lost,
And I have won my date upon the morrow,
Of the longing sorrow,
Which runs into my fate,
In which I burn to hate.
My tears for you turn to blood,
And runs into a river of fire,
For my heart burns in love and desire.

The heart boils in passion,
But lies in turmoil,
Cooling in the fading darkness of my mind,
have I really found a soul of that kind?

Our souls lie in a world of confusion,
But is written and Divine,
Or just a illusion?

Love of my God that I see,
For the Devil of the world is gone,
Ans so a rose of paradise blooms into a new world of love,
Should we mourn?

Reality is born and done,
Wilting from the sun,
And fantasy of the world is real,
And so I begin to feel.

This reality of a new dimension I create,
I drawn upon our fate.

Our lives,
So different and diversely true,
Now wondering in creation of you,
And soon our souls will glow with hue.

I contend the reality of the world,
In a tornado hurled.

I see forever,
indefinitely,
Two souls upon this date,
Carved in stone of time,
Forever in destiny upon our fate.

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Nothing in time is written,
Until somebody has lived to write it,
Through fate and destiny,
Fantasy of the soul,
Can become reality of the world,
And can be written in time forever...

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Seongwoo commented on Another Reality

01-03-2011

You found the truth in the hallucinations. However, it is the eternal homework. The truth is always looming, like soul's color.

Rhymer commented on Another Reality

10-24-2010

The future is ours to mold, you express this so well. As our future we hold in our hands so is eternity. Excellent write my friend.

SavVySam commented on Another Reality

05-09-2010

I find it interesting and empowering the way you choose to write your own reality into being, creating a future of your own making...No victim of imagined destinies...its your life, your soul, your reality...Nicely done!

angel33614

05/12/2010

Well I would be a blind fool if I said it worked, lol. I am stubborn to no avail and would not let love slip away without even trying to fight for it, just wasn't meant to be. Like all life lessons i have learned I did it the hard way... Thanks again for your kind comments! Your friend Angel. Purity of the soul, journey well!!!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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