Another State Of Confusion

15 Comments

Poem Commentary

Just when I thought I was winnin' ~ I find that I'm losin' ...

Another State Of Confusion

I'm livin' a life . .
Livin' a dream,
And I'm always endin' up
Somewhere inbetween.
Sanity - Is a state of the mind,
Reality - Is sometimes hard to find!

All my life . .
There's been nothin' but confusion.
Day and night,
I see nothin' but illusions.
Running into obstacles - Striking me blind,
Shattering the barriors of my mind!
~~~
I'm livin' in . .
A state of confusion.
Just when I thought I was winnin',
I find that I'm losin'!
I'm lost in another . .
Another state of confusion.
Don't wanna spend my life,
Locked up in seclusion!
In another state of confusion!!
~~~
I keep messin'up , ,
Keep losin' control.
And I swear to God,
Somethin's possessin' my soul!
I get his feelin'
From deep down inside.
Can't help but wonder,
Just how I've survived!

Can someone Help Me . .
Can you Help Me Please!
Point me back on the road,
To Reality!
Straighten out my mind - Help clear these illusions!
Can you Help Me out of this state of confusion!!!
~~~
I'm livin' in . .
A state of confusion.
Just when I thought I was winnin',
I find that I'm losin'!
I'm lost in another . .
Another state of confusion.
Don't wanna spend my life,
Locked up in seclusion!
In another state of confusion!!
~~~
                                                         KjK
                                                                880808

Poem Comments

(15)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

bluskyinthenite commented on Another State Of Confusion

04-12-2011

"I get his feelin' From deep down inside. Can't help but wonder, Just how I've survived!" Ken you are a survivor thats for sure as am I.. we will come out ahead. Just stand still and breath in breath out. thank god i can do that. Love you poem. big hug at you dude.. keep them coming

FranzJ commented on Another State Of Confusion

09-04-2010

yes life is a constant state of confusion - The Temptations (I thinks it was) sang about it -"Ball of Confusion" - espectialy today everything seems backwards which leated to more confusion

knight4696

09/06/2010

Thanks Frank! :) Yes, I believe it was the Temptations ... Man, I haven't heard that song in years... and yes I agree ... the world today is messed up and only adds to the confusion. Thanks again pal! :) Ken

JadedJezzabel commented on Another State Of Confusion

08-16-2010

been here too many times to count...............nice song.......

knight4696

08/16/2010

Thanks again JJ for reading my older writes - I appreciate the time you have taken ..and I'm so happy you have enjoyed them. Thanks again my new friend! :) Ken

Teardrops commented on Another State Of Confusion

03-13-2010

Knight you are the true singer of songs wow i s all i can say and i talk alot great my friend truly one i would buy and listen to Marie

knight4696

03/14/2010

Than you so much Marie! :) I write a lot of poems - but song writing is really my true love. I'm so happy you enjoy my songs! Thanks again! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on Another State Of Confusion

02-06-2010

and still yet another song which I enjoyed very well written.

knight4696

02/06/2010

Thanks again Angel! :) This one is one of my personal faves! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again, Ken

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

knight4696’s Poems (104)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Suicide Jack 3
THE BATTLE 0
Mother 8
Full Moon At Half Moon Bay 4
December Mourning 5
Turbulance 10
The Birth Of The Black Knight (Prelude to The Damsel's Demise) 2
Members Only ... The Complete Six Part Series 3
Members Only .. Part Six "Dead Awake" The Conclusion 5
Members Only .. Part Five "dis-Member-m
ent"
7
Members Only .. Part Four "The Manifestation
"
8
Members Only .. Part Three "The Enticement" 11
Members Only .. Part Two "Membership Has It's Benefits" 15
Members Only .. Part One "The Grand Opening" 17
Labyrinth Of Lies 16
A Crazy Christmas 19
In A Child's Eyes 33
A Perfect Peace 22
Summer's End 18
Insomniac 22
What If? 19
The Widow's Web 25
The FairyTale Ending 17
CrAcKeD 18
The Castle's Keep 14
Into The Realm 15
Alone In The Dark 24
The Fraternity 16
Take My Hand If You Dare (Video) 18
The Possession 17
Demon Seed 21
RADICAL 17
Cries Of The Innocent 17
The Demon Dance 15
The Offering 13
Take My Hand If You Dare 13
Somewhere Within ... 13
Festival Of Frights 14
Serenity Severance 15
BloodStone Hotel 26
Sister Sin 24
A Cry In The Knight 23
As Darkness Calls . . . 18
WTF?! 28
HEADBANGERS BALL 14
The Monsters Of The Moat 10
The Damsel's Demise (a grim gothic tale) 5
The Awakening 8
Sunshine In The Rain 5
Path To Misery 18
Unholy Union ~ Part II 11
Emotional Inebriation 20
Ghost Writer 24
Nocturnal Emissions 16
You've Got Mail 28
VALENTINES 13
Voices From Beyond The Door 22
Knight Dreams 25
Dead Silence 23
Beyond The Door ... 29
Damned If I Know ... 24
Captive 25
Sex With The X 42
Celestial Romance 28
In My Desperate Hour 27
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 15
On The Cliff's Edge 31
Maybe Tomorrow ... 29
Ride On 29
ALL GOD'S CHILDREN (A Christmas Song) 38
UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning 42
Blood Rain 49
My Broken Heart Bleeds 24
Oblivious 24
Coexistence 26
Haven't We Met Before? 19
Blank Page 87
Salted Wound 14
In A Blink Of An Eye 24
Under The Autumn Moon 21
Dirty Talk 21
The Thrones Of Mankind 12
Shake Ya Down!! 19
Save Me!! 17
SATANA 17
Winter Witch 13
Forever - I Love You 10
Tuning Out 15
Fool In The Dark 15
Separate Stars 17
Another State Of Confusion 15
Desolation Of The Damned 17
Learning To Love 15
Forever Rockin'!! 10
Dawn's Coming! 12
It May All Be A Dream 12
Fountains Of Flame 12
Reflections Of Yesterday 6
It Depends!!! 9
SOMETHING MEANT TO BE 17
OPEN WINDOWS " A Different Point Of View" 15
INDECISION 19
Ponder 23
Rainbows Of Tommorow 25