Pietro commented on Anticipation II

07-02-2013

Nicely written, an enjoyable read. I liked the way you pattered your words, it was really cool, Thanks for sharing Peter

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kdarcy commented on Anticipation II

04-12-2009

An easy read for me, enjoyed it ... and will again

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Nicko7 commented on Anticipation II

02-20-2009

Interesting again i get a feeling of some inner sadness from this another great piece well written

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cousinsoren commented on Anticipation II

02-18-2009

Very clever poem. Title is appropriate. "I hope it worth the weight" great pun. To wait is a heavy load. "Just keep those eyes on me/while I descend to kiss" The poetess skilfully manages to load these lines with passion, They sound erotic--sexy--LOL. All lines are carefully and effectively crafted. "Repitition." has the poetess deliberately mispelt? If it was deliberate,why has she?

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Robb08 commented on Anticipation II

02-09-2009

very clever poem...nice play of words at the end.

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