Apparently Apartment

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    Apparently Apartment

    Sunrise behind jagged skyline

    It’s Terran decadence, it’s Holy Roman decline

    And it's home

    Carved in concrete and chrome

     

    That’s the universe and that right there, that’s me

    Laying on the couch and watching TV

    3rd floor, to the left, behind the door

    I’m waiting for rain, I’m waiting for war

     

    What to wear, what on earth to eat

    The robot wakes early and sweeps the street

    An animatronic smile and built-in hope

    I wonder who programmed his ability to cope

     

    I’d like to try out real life someday

    Let’s go to the movies and fly away

    Have a drink or two and let rock and roll

    Take its toll

     

    These are the days and they’ll come for awhile

    It looks like a party and feels like a trial

    Out of all women, you'll be my wife

    This might just be my only life

     

    They say a thousand different storms are coming

    I deny myself asleep and leave the taps running

    A picture of a loved one on my shelf

    Go fuck yourself

     

    It’s all pretty damn grey it seems to seem

    Somewhere someone gets lost in a scream

    And that was that

    Queue the crossing cat

     

    God is dead and I’m growing old

    The sun is red and the night is cold

    On my own

    Into the unknown

     

    The world takes shape and it ain’t too pretty

    Nostalgic as hell in a space age city

    This view will do

    It’ll have to

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    KristianDolberg commented on Apparently Apartment

    01-14-2011

    When you wrote this, have you by ANY chance been playing Fallout: New Vegas? I like the idea here, and the feeling. The feeling of some kind of post-apocalyptic world. Fallout-ish, or if I may, Wall-E-ish. I really like it!

    stigbohnolsen

    01/15/2011

    I actually started playing New Vegas a couple of days after i finished this, so i think it's just my keen sense of pessimism that informed this piece. :p

    AlysonAlive commented on Apparently Apartment

    10-31-2010

    Wow. Just...Wow. I love the rhyming, the rhythm, the sound, and the feeling that comes with this write. I honestly wish I could write this well. Well done. ♥

    stigbohnolsen

    10/31/2010

    Thank you so much! :) i've read a couple of yours and i'd say you write at least as well as I!

    arronpalmer commented on Apparently Apartment

    10-30-2010

    "An animatronic smile and built-in hope I wonder who programmed his ability to cope" is a stunning couplet. Fantastic ramble and I agree with Olan, I'd like to see this win.

    Olan01 commented on Apparently Apartment

    10-29-2010

    Excellent poem that is metaphorical and deep. I love it. This is a winner. Olan

    MindNumbing commented on Apparently Apartment

    10-29-2010

    There's that style that I just LOVE! Your poetry seems effortless, thanks to that natural feeling flow that you have. This was meant to be read aloud and you should be onstage. Fantastic job!

    stigbohnolsen

    10/29/2010

    Thank you so much MindNumbing! :) I've been performing at some poetry slams (in danish) over the summer, and i've gotten some really good response. And you're right, this probably is meant to be read aloud.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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