Appreciated

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    Appreciated

    In the light of recent depression

    And the loom of the future

    I cannot understate my appreciation 

    Of the wonderful overgrowth yonder the oft-trodden path

    Of the companionship of people that love and listen

    Of awing music and thought-feeding volumes

    Of good wine and tender filet mignon

    Of women easy on the eye

    Of sincerity and winter hugs

    Of humor and proud quirkiness

    Of conversation and masturbation

    Of acting stupid on a Friday night

    Of Calvin and Hobbes soothing my hangover

    Of good news on a Monday morning that really needs it

    Of musing in math class

    Of multibillion dollar skyscrapers not being able to scrape the perpetually priceless sky 

    Of the weeds growing in my backyard

    Of sleeping like a baby and dreaming of elsewhere

    Of being a part of the human project

    And I appreciate the knowledge that someone loves me back

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Appreciated

    10-01-2010

    powerful in its simple structure and exquisite form........time tested message all can relate to. excellent poem.

    stigbohnolsen

    10/01/2010

    Thank you! :) i've been writing a lot of dark stuff lately, so i thought i'd write something a bit more uplifting to signal that i do realize that the world ain't all bad. :p

    Marsink commented on Appreciated

    10-01-2010

    Optimism promises a brighter day, fights off depression and rewards one with a deeper appreciation of simple living and a grateful heart. Unique and uncommon sense defines your poem, here! Applause building!

    stigbohnolsen

    10/01/2010

    Sometimes you just have to take a step back and look at all the wonders of this flawed world

    ginga commented on Appreciated

    09-29-2010

    Olsen, I loved your list of what matters, ty for your tone of awakening. ginga

    MindNumbing commented on Appreciated

    09-28-2010

    Sometimes it's the acceptance and appreciation of those little things that most people see as insignificant, that makes everything fall into line and right with the world. Nicely done my friend... I'll be reflecting on that skyscrapers line for awhile ;)

    Rygar commented on Appreciated

    09-27-2010

    very nicely penned piece, I enjoyed it, I don't have any notes for you (sorry) other than it was a good read :-) Write on...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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