You Looking Yet?

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Feelings are a choice you have to make and no one can make them for you unless you choose to let them, it is still your choice!!!

You Looking Yet?

It was just here because I just put it here, so how can it be there?

Maybe I should be more alert when watching stuff and staring where?
 
Little water can hide most of the world, air can keep me from looking.

Unless the things I ignore have that one special smell, like cooking.

It will hurt as long as you hold on tight and lessen as you let it free.

To let things go removes their power over you as you go on to be.

Got your attention? Now you know, the power it has is really yours.

Happy, sad, You decide, either let it go or watch when it pours,

And know the water may be tears, yours. Or just a gentle sprinkle,

As you learn to let go filling your eyes with a twinkle.

Choose and choose well, but for yourself since others will do it too,

Look out for number one as, hopefully, you have learned to do to!

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

combatrider’s Poems (50)

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A Good Deed 0
Reality 0
"Might Have Been Me!" 0
Life Start of a Little Person 1
You Looking Yet? 0
"I Knew That Place" 0
The Only Way 3
A Way to Tell 1
What Can I Say? 1
Him 2
Abuse 1
Only the Lonely 1
A Story Told Never Grows Old Before Its Time 1
Not Mine 3
Happy or Sad, Only You Can Choose 4
Don't see me, listen? 3
Why Would I? 2
Sassy 0
An Ode to Those 0
What Was the Work I Started? 1
Resolution 0
Don't matter to me, does it? 0
How to Fix the World, My Thoughts 0
You Made It 1
As it Seems 1
Relativity 1
It'll Be Better 0
Me 4
Truth of a Nature 1
...maybe..... 2
Who was .......... 1
As if 2
A little breeze 1
Whether Changes 3
Make it Right 1
JUDGEMENT 1
He was Me 1
And what if? 2
RACE 2
Wasn't Me 2
Might Be, Might Be 2
WHat I GoT To DO 0
Right? 2
How do You Choose? 0
Confused 4
If Only I 1
True Story, No Answer 1
Watching the Sleeper 4
Tricks and Lies and Such 4