Are you okay?

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    Really bored this was really bad but it was inspired by my mom at the dinner table.

    Are you okay?

    Are you okay?

    Ya I am fine.

    Are you sure?

    Yes, I am sure, but are you okay?

    No I am not.

    Are you lonely?

    No I am not lonely, are you lonely?

    Yes, I am lonely.

    Are you sad?

    I have no reason, are you sad?

    Yes I am sad.

    Are you sane?

    Why would I not be?

    Because me and you are the same!

    You are not fine thats why you made me.

    You are not sure thats why I out lined it.

    You are lonely thats why I stayed.

    You are sad because you make me ungay.

    You are not sane because you are still speaking to me.

    And this is just because we are one.

     

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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