As a Fine Wine

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  • Attraction

    Poem Commentary

    I guess you have to be into wine to like this one.

    As a Fine Wine

    As a Fine Wine

    Such depth, such richness, so complex
    Sexy as a summer night’s kiss
    She is the cause of my sedation
    Elegant in her fine presentation

    Silky texture, her smooth touch
    How I desire her charms so much
    My senses begin to spin and spin
    She leaves me wanting her again

    She permeates my soul as I deeply breathe
    Through me her bouquet wraps and weaves
    Binding my heart as I flavor her to my lips
    With each taste my bedraggled body slips…

    into oblivion

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    jenifer commented on As a Fine Wine

    06-13-2014

    a pure love not something twisted dirty, claps for proudness .
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    MootPoint

    06/13/2014

    Thank you for your comment. Plz read more of my stuff.

    ccslim commented on As a Fine Wine

    06-09-2013

    A fine cross example leaving deep thought. I really like the movement throughout. Very nice write.
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    poett commented on As a Fine Wine

    06-03-2013

    Sensual n elaborated piece which makes me think of nice passionate moments with my husband. Lol... its always nice to read passionate writes.
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    tmcdermott commented on As a Fine Wine

    04-19-2013

    i quite like this piece, particularly how you have conjoined the desire for vino and a femme fatale of sorts. The longing and relief (or expected relief) shines like the bouquet of a fine wine. my only nitpick, and it works as it is i think, is the 'bedraggled body'. i wonder if something suggesting relief or expectation might work a bit better. nonetheless something to be proud of.
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    MootPoint

    04/22/2013

    I am not sure what you mean. Hey, thanks for commenting.

    dahlusion commented on As a Fine Wine

    04-18-2013

    A deeply stimulating piece with imagery to fill in the blanks; a soul-felt experience ...
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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