As I Lay In My Own Pity

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    As I Lay In My Own Pity

    I lay in my own pity.
    I wake up in the ammonia scent.
    As I wish I were in the clean, fresh city.
    For maybe there I may even be content.

    I lay in my own pity.
    At one time She was witty.
    She was not just the witch.
    Why did I have to snitch.

    I lay in my own pity.
    Its finally my time.
    And I finally begin to drift.
    And this will be my last rhyme.

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    cmlestrade commented on As I Lay In My Own Pity

    08-22-2009

    Very good poem, leaves one curious. good rhyme and rhythm great effort.

    writingislove

    08/27/2009

    Thank you!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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