As I turn away...My high place

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    My thoughts describing the last entry to the world that I know of and walking into the unknown

    As I turn away...My high place


    How long have I been on this road?
    when I have desperately tried
    to
    put together the pieces of a
    complicated life?
    and for so long
    I never understood why
    until now
    I never fitted in
    anywhere I went
    but I
    always stood out
    so my nature 
    made me a outcast or a loner
    but
    As I turn away
    Im embracing 
    My high place
    And now
    I understand that being pure
    requires having a soul lite
    of all the unneccessary
    and all the things that are not essential
    and only of the things 
    that are
    of you
    can you feel me
    as I turn away
    to
    My high place 
    so as I turn away
    and begin to take my place...
    where will this journey lead me
    and what will happen to me?
    I won't fight and struggle
    anymore
    As I turn away
    and take
    My high place

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    tierra7 commented on As I turn away...My high place

    12-19-2010

    Excellent! I enjoyed this, written with much depth...Happy Holidays! Tierra@}-'-,
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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