As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

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    As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

     As I was comforted by the crisp air
    Felt its peace flow through my hair
    A sparkling emerald, rarely seen
    Emulated sun in buoyant green
    Calmed by reclined rays, cool & fair.

    I scoped the kiddies play & run
    I felt my spirit join their fun
    Serenity basks a gleeful scene
    As I was comforted.

    A bad forecast is due, but none came
    This soothing day remains the same
    Hints of rough shows pastel view
    Acrid trials, of maraud, loses through
    A final twinge, still did not pierce
    As I was comforted.

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    Pocahantas commented on As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

    04-24-2013

    Been awhile hasn't it chef? I really like the mood I get from this. Reminds me of a beautiful spring day. It's a shame so few people really take the time to enjoy it. Good write :)
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    poeticmike

    07/06/2013

    Yes it has and thank you..

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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