as Sweet as Lilacs...


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as Sweet as Lilacs...

as sweet as Lilacs

were you tempted so…
was it oh so sweet…
turn your back…
on the rest of us…
did your tongue begin to bleed…
when you spoke those words…
spilling your lies…
was the Master pleased…

we thought you were just like us…
you shared the same as us…
you worked along side us…
every day you follow the Masters orders…
just like the rest of us…
working at his villa…

you watched the two of us…
shackled to the wall…
Master’s whip did kiss us…
in the great hall…
did you smile when he made…
our backs bleed…

~*~’A traitorous snitch she is dear Jen’~*~
~*~’Oh yes, dear Sarah, I think she is’~*~
~*~’but you know how sweet’~*~
~*~’revenge can be’~*~
~*~’she does look kind of green’~*~
~*~’yes Jen, she certainly does’~*~

as sweet as Lilacs…
your head in that bucket…
did you eat something green…
oh such a pity…
no friends to help now…

we knew you would chose…
the prettiest bowl…
to each your slave gruel…
you think your better…
then all of us…
it was easy to make you bleed…
since your only friend is greed…

what will you do now?…
a lesson learned…
can be as sweet as Lilacs…

hand in hand we walk...
out the door...
as friends do...
those lovely Lilacs...
waiting for us to adore...
just left you there...
your head in your bucket...
of greed...
a small price you paid...
for your deed...

~*~’I do so love the smell of Lilacs’~*~
~*~’Don’t you Jen?’~*~
~*~’Oh yes Sarah, I most certainly do.’~*~
~*~’shall we pick some today?’~*~
~*~’yes, lets do’~*~

Written by
May 2010

This is a prelude to the next chapter of my book that I have been writing for some time now. There are seventeen chapters and number eighteen will be titled “As Sweet as Lilacs”. My book is titled “Enslaved’ The Story of Jen”. All our welcome to view it and follow along as it is created. at a work of fiction by Asha.

Enjoy all
love Asha

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ginga commented on as Sweet as Lilacs...


Asha, Such a creative piece and a great prelude to your chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed the emotion. ginga



thank you dear for your wonderful comment on this piece, I am so sorry that I missed this one, but I found it when I was going through some of my old writes. thanks as always for reading and commenting on my work...........loves ya bunches asha

simoneaugustus commented on as Sweet as Lilacs...


Such beautiful word choices! Great write!



thank you dear for the wonderful comment. I am so sorry that I missed your comment but glad I found it when I was checking some of my old asha

dahlusion commented on as Sweet as Lilacs...


the passion, metaphors, and poetic imagery are superb and oh so delicate. Bravo!!



oh dear, I am sorry my friend for missing your comment on this piece. glad I thought about going through some of my old writings and found some that I had not replied to...thank you dear for the wonderful comment.........loves ya asha

Bettysrainbow48 commented on as Sweet as Lilacs...


This reminds me of a poem I wrote about lies. I liked it.I should put mine up too. Good write Good idea.



thank you dear for your sweet comment, I am so sorry that I missed your comment on this piece. I found it as I was going through some of my old writings.........thank you much dear for the sweet comment loves ya asha

MootPoint commented on as Sweet as Lilacs...


I like the metaphors here. Some of us never learn from lessons of greed. They keep on helping themselves to more gruel. Thanks for the write.



oh wow, I just realized going through some of my old poems that I never thanked you for the sweet comment. I am sorry for the late reply.....thank you dear friend for your wonderful asha

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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