As The River Runs.

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I'm just so surprised at the don't care attitude towards known polluters of our environment and the unwillingness to let them face consequences for their actions. The big corporations and individuals. They know themselves.

As The River Runs.

As the river runs I listened by its bank,
The clattering sounds, its hissing, it's pollutants when it stank,
Though it's dark and colored, it's refereshing to me,
A victim of man's defilement is still a pleasure to see.
A dumping ground of refuse, is bombarding us it's true,
Polluting it is common place, it's colors misty blue!

With such abundant knowledge, that very few does care,
Protecting the environment lacks importance that is clear!
Whenever we think of such a violation think of the life in it,
Some rather take a middle ground and be indefinate,
As to where they stand with this issue of pollutants that made,
Sickness, death and pain  to refrain from calling a spade a spade.

Should we not keep in check these rapists of nature that be,
The ones that think nothing of destroying our trees?
That hangs by our riverbanks and keep our environment cool,
Is nothing to the idiot, just nothing for the fool,
He spills in our rivers that runs out to the sea,
As much contaminants as he can possibly!

Oh! as I long for the times when as a little boy,
To play by this rolling river with my dingy and my toys,
I languish at the longing of these days to return,
But it's such a bitter pill for all the facts that I've learnt.
I may never be able to take water in my hand,
From you noisy and beautiful river with it's darkened sand.

I can never bathe in you or have a picnic near,
Or have fun with family, with laughter and with cheer,
For as we become industrialized we will never care,
The proliferation of our natural laws have heightened all our fears,
Those that have the power to forbid this action must,
Do something about this don't just stand and cuss!

I see all the fishes dying, great big ones and small,
Yet I see them frying in kitchens and on stalls,
We should not eat them unless we protect the source,
And punish the polluters by dictation or by force!
They'll not learn unless you hold up a big stick!
And continue to strike 'em with fines and big licks.

 

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earthly commented on As The River Runs.

02-27-2010

I feel akin to anyone who will stand up for the environment-we need to care about rivers-ty...Earthly

Chaos128 commented on As The River Runs.

02-17-2010

A well executed indictment of the despoilers of the environment. The good news is we're waking up; the bad news is we aren't waking up fast enough.

Poemeater

02/18/2010

Thanks for your kind comment

redbloodink commented on As The River Runs.

02-07-2010

tough subject..... Let me say tho... self survival is a great thing tho... I think truth is here in this poem.... But in the vilest of our own creation we can breath and live... This write got a little long but it had passion... some times I use one write for two... I think you might want to try that some time..... over all tho.... good write....

Poemeater

02/18/2010

Thanks to your comment and advice.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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