Ashes Of Her Heart.

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    Ashes Of Her Heart.

    She looks around, But there's not a sound
    She feels...Dead...
    Her dreams infected by the words he once said
    As she stares blankly at the mirror, She sees nothing.
    She looks inside herself, she finds nothing..

    The things she once loved, the friend she once had, Nothing..
    She's cold to the core, And numb to the bone,
    Sick of being so very alone..
    Sick of hiding the pain, Tired of pretending she's okay.
    With false hope of a brighter day.

    But in her world, The sun never rises
    She's tried so hard to forget it..
    But his embrace was so warm..Her heart was so torn..
    She never found the strength to get up,
    Her cries went unheard..

    And until she closed the door that night, He never knew
    All the pain he put her through..
    With no strength left in her will to live, She falls apart..
    And in his hands he holds,
    The Ashes Of Her Heart..

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    SavVySam commented on Ashes Of Her Heart.

    09-12-2010

    It is sad that although much talking takes place...sometimes not much communication of heart is conveyed, or received. Nicely penned piece!

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Ashes Of Her Heart.

    09-12-2010

    that was a very passionate and emotion filled write dear. your rhythm and very smooth in this powerful read. thanks for sharing...love asha

    kdarcy commented on Ashes Of Her Heart.

    09-12-2010

    In the emotion of love feelings run deep on both sides, sometimes still water on one side and rushing torrents on the other or vice versa. Without balance, love can not live or even sustain itself very well. I enjoyed the words, thanks for sharing

    Drivingczar commented on Ashes Of Her Heart.

    04-12-2009

    Your heart will heal and become stronger over time! Don't fall off of the path! Great write!

    rollerderby commented on Ashes Of Her Heart.

    01-22-2009

    Well written my dear. The pain of lost love can be one of the hardest to bare. I've always said " what comes around goes around", So he too will know heartbreak. I hope yours will mend soon! Doug

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