astral anticipation

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  • Lost Love

    astral anticipation

    a buried continent
    submerged in the depths of love
    interdimensional embrace
    golden distances herald absentment
    horizons have erased
    your light
    painfully effaced
    from my sight
    murky seas camouflage
    feelings that had come to be
    eye of the storm
    now spies
    the unity
    that remains
    between
    you
    and
    me.

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    dahlusion commented on astral anticipation

    03-13-2009

    "horizons have erased your light" —— simply creative, perfect, and poetic.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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