at a funeral

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    at a funeral

     


    with sorrow adorned
    the mourners come to mourn...

    upon a pedestal a casket sits
    through the air the silence drifts
    draped with roses as red as blood
    with razor thorns not meant to cut


    down the face a make-up smear
    abstract painting made by tears
    men hold back as women weep
    wiping tears from their cheeks
    with a swipe of their sleeve
    the men control the tears that creep


    upon the silk an idol lays
    from this world he has escaped
    in a coffin of lacquered black
    a skindred statue placed on his back


    a tranquil look upon his face
    finally devoid of any pain
    on this day he appears to sleep
    and finally looks to be at peace


    in my head i hear a song
    a baritone singing strong
    i close my eyes as echoes dance
    and put me in a placid trance


    the song i hear is just for me
    a calming voice that brings me peace
    not a sound for all to hear
    within my head ringing clear


    to pay my last respects today
    ive closed my eyes to find a way
    and as i slept its come to me
    at a funeral in a dream


     

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    susanismith commented on at a funeral

    06-11-2010

    This poem left me speechless...Bravo!!! Great piece!

    Dano

    06/12/2010

    thank you for taking the time to read...

    Madelynn commented on at a funeral

    05-31-2010

    Rich in realism, and deep in the minds scape. Yes, this is the ceremony we all must visit at some unpredictable time in our exsistance. Yes, these are the 'gatherings' that we always seem to remember so vividly.-you, however, brought a new aspect to the ritual; in every event of death we accompany- we ALL self-reflect, and we all have to quietly swallow the truth: one day that porcelein-like face we gaze at, will become us. These are the facts that decorate our subconscience. The truths that find us, even in our dreams.-Greatness is yours, Dano.;)peace,Maddi

    Dano

    06/01/2010

    thank you so much maddi...

    MarionYost commented on at a funeral

    05-10-2010

    Damn, THAT'S Talent. great job hun. As always. I enjoyed the read. All the best -Marion-

    Dano

    05/11/2010

    thank you marion

    WordSlinger commented on at a funeral

    05-09-2010

    I admire your deep writes, you can tell that you really feel the world around you, ty WS

    Dano

    05/09/2010

    thanks word for stopping by and commenting

    Teardrops commented on at a funeral

    05-07-2010

    the poem is awsome the way it is . I can see all you are discribing you have taken me into your dream . A 10 for me great job Marie

    Dano

    05/09/2010

    thanks again marie for reading and commenting

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Dano’s Poems (150)

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    a blinding eclipse 16
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    immortal kiss 47
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    what i write (part 2) 8
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    reaching out 2
    the dark and the light... 1
    the insistent demon 2
    sorry... 3
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    im so sorry... 3
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    projected pain 1
    the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
    panic 2
    the mourning fog 1
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    through the night 1
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    a mournful rain 1
    i cant protect me 2
    my comfort place 0
    an echo shifts 1
    the monster 2
    welcome to my life 0
    the past is alive... 1
    ... 1
    standing on the edge 2
    my smile... 1
    anxiety 2
    my reality 0
    another view... 0
    untitled... 0
    jagged pill 2
    in the dark 1
    what to do 1
    how can i... 1
    life... 3
    a crust of pain 1
    keeping me weak... 2
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    in the attic 4
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