At My Weakest

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    At My Weakest

    You probably don't know
    What you're doing to me
    But why should you care?
    You don't even see

    These scars so pale
    Against my cold skin
    The softly glistening tears
    That i can't hold in

    I run and run
    But eventually i stop
    Exhaustion closes in
    And up your face pops

    For when i am weakest
    When i'm down on my knees
    The moments i miss you
    I feel agony seize.

    By: Liz Prosser 


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    jj1562 commented on At My Weakest

    12-29-2011

    powerful, true, relatable just what poetry is intended to be. Nice pure simple write I loved it!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    First Part of Melody "Unseen" 1
    At My Weakest 1
    My Thoughts 0
    A Writer Is There Own Worst Critic 1
    Advice To A Child 0
    A Painful Fate 0
    Humanity 1
    A Confused Heart 2
    Greater Things 1
    Happiness 1
    Dont Leave Me 0
    Not So Old Habits 0
    In My Mind 0
    Runner-up 0
    Skinny 0
    Justice 0
    Depression Hurts 1
    Painful Memories 0
    Oregon's Lovely Gloom 0
    Last Year 0
    Missing 0
    Invisible 1
    Love 0
    TUG OF WAR 0
    Not Knowing 0
    Fate 1
    Pointless 1
    Lost cause 1
    In The Balance 1
    Random 0
    Unable 1
    Finally, maybe... 1
    Just People 1
    SEVER 0
    ASHES 1
    For Me 0
    Why? 0
    EXPLAIN 2
    No Me 1
    Can you still 0
    Let me be 0
    Mirror To Nowhere 0
    Perfect 0
    WATCHING 0
    Lost 0
    HYPOCRITSY 0
    Tension 0
    Wonder 1
    Release 0
    Pain 0
    Empty 1
    Tehe 2
    I love you 2
    Texting 0
    Writing 0
    Silence 2
    Crackling Energy 0