AT THE BEACH

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    AT THE BEACH

    If I were a great fish
    Majestic, salty and wet
    You will be the aquarium
    Where I like to be kept

    The moist of your skin
    Mixed with the sand
    Bright like a pearl
    You make the sun expand

    I caress your feet
    Like towers of sand
    The sea comes and goes
    Like you in the night

    We are two souls
    That will never part
    Bodies lying by the sea
    Expensive masterpieces of art

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    janetdawson commented on AT THE BEACH

    03-29-2009

    bravo!!!

    heymily commented on AT THE BEACH

    03-05-2009

    I lovwe the little guy in the picture! I just want to eat him!! ok good poem.

    Cinderella commented on AT THE BEACH

    03-05-2009

    I love the first paragraph, the descriptions are wonderful! You're an excellent poet!

    mykhail commented on AT THE BEACH

    03-05-2009

    Fenix, I have not found a poem of yours that does not deserve a "10"! Bravo!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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