Atoms of Stars


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    Not sure this one is complete just yet.

    Atoms of Stars

    Within us are the atoms of stars
    Awakened, the dance becomes ours
    Pulsating generator a door flew ajar

    Sending forth a recognition transmission
    By the throttle a catalyst ignition
    Called forth by free volition

    Sparks that caught the flames of time
    Ripped from the fabric of inner rhyme
    Life that blossoms full in its prime

    Energies of noble alignment
    Reveal to us this first assignment
    As we move outward in agreement

    Like an arrow shot from the bow
    It drew forth to bestow
    A union from long ago

    Unbounded it expands the mark
    Memories form the circle arc
    Upon tomorrow does embark

    Herald of evolution core
    Here we step up to the shore
    Twin manifestors alive explore

    Hidden dimensions
    Creational attentions
    Limitless inventions

    To counter the dross
    We come across
    Hint of sassiness to the sauce

    For now indwells reason to hear
    Until the way at last is clear
    And we make our world premiere

    Graceladymn 8/11/09

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    SavVySam commented on Atoms of Stars


    You definitely" counter the dross by adding your sassiness to this sauce!" Very crafty work.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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