August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

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    • ManOnTheMoon
    • Past the ocean, and into the clouds, we sail into the sun...

    August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    So,
    Theres this girl,
    And she had me from
    "Hello".
    But she never knew
    Just how I felt for her,
    How hard I have fallen for her,
    Or
    How far I would go for her.
    But
    I was always there,
    Helping her,
    When she needed me the most.
    After
    Watching her
    Go guy after guy,
    Each one
    Breaking her heart,
    Each one
    Meeting my fists.
    She
    Leads me on,
    Turns me away,
    Shows me
    That there are more guys
    For her.
    They
    Show her
    Just how fast
    They can break her heart.
    I
    Show them
    How fast they
    Can meet the floor.
    I
    Fight for her,
    Comfort her,
    Let her know
    Everything will be
    OK,
    Wipe her tears
    When times are rough
    And never became
    Anything more.
    She
    Could not see
    How I felt
    Until
    I was not there
    Anymore.
    I
    Had to change,
    To seek another,
    To break my curse,
    She had on me.
    I
    Had her from
    "I have to go"
    Because
    Just then
    She knew,
    Just how she felt,
    When I had
    To walk away.

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    victoriandoll commented on August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    10-20-2010

    this is great.. how do you write in such a loveing way? i love how the end rlly starts the whole thing. great write!

    nam1292 commented on August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    09-26-2010

    i love this because it shows how much some guys go thru when they are helping out a female friend n things get close w/o realizing it. this is so beautiful bc it shows how much u try to protect women from men and their tricks. great write great use of words n phrasing. great job moon

    labitch commented on August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    09-21-2010

    in this one, you completely tell your emotional story! VERY well written!!I LOVE, LOVE this been there, done that! nice job! 10 from me!!

    shywoodrose commented on August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    08-31-2010

    So powerful! Unfortunately most of us don't know what we have until its gone. But a second chance may be just what she needs. All the best :)

    AmadeusEx commented on August 30, 2010, 2:08 AM

    08-30-2010

    well done, i applaud your ability to feel such deep emotion for someone who is clearly unworthy...this piece reminded me of my own high school frustrations and those of my friends when dealing with beautiful, messed up girls

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