Aunt Hattie...An-cestry!

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I Couldn't be there when my Great Aunts and Grandma Died but I was taught family by my Dad and that made the losses great.With My Aunt Hattie who died @ 106 years old, I began to stop and think of what family is to me and while writing a poem to say good bye, a few twists and I realized I hadn't lost at all...I Gained. My biggest Blessing was being back home to see her at 104 years old and she looked at me and remembered my name!

Aunt Hattie...An-cestry!

One hundred and six, a month...
Then one day.
We find through the night, you have slept-slipped away.
You might think it odd that I could not feel sad.
In my memory I looked over,
                                    The "All's" that we had.

Time is precious when Family is center...with wisdom we gain, from many the mentor

A Great aunt you are, a great Aunt to me,
a family, a name-a heritage!...a Tree.
Oh, miss you I will but I let you live on...in time locked away, now taking your place-in, "My Ancestors Song".
Sing dear lady, with the angels above and light up the Sky!
I hear the Crescendo...I know the love.

I thank God for the times you remembered my name - I thank life, yours was long, His honor your gain.

Aunt Yie, Aunt Mammie, Grandma Elsie and now you...
I've grown up all over and often wander thru,
the fields, the flowers, the skies always blue.
I'm six, now eight and thru my teens!
I'm feeling the hugs, I'm dreaming the dreams.
You're always with me, I am living to be,
                          all things taught, what others will see
and they'll know I am rich...because you've put you in me.

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mamasan commented on Aunt Hattie...An-cestry!

11-18-2009

What beauty you write and it is obvious you were loved too and add to the goodness in life.

JeffBQ

11/18/2009

Mamasan, I appreciate what I feel from your comments. I sincerely appreciate what you have said.

Rhymer commented on Aunt Hattie...An-cestry!

11-18-2009

What a great tribute to your loved ones. Excellent write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

JeffBQ

11/18/2009

Thanks Rhymer, I appreciate your feedback. It is encouraging to hear from your peers.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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