Autumn Love


Autumn Love

Lay me down in the autumn leaves
amongst the forest of the trees.
your body is so warm against mine
as we fall so easliy into
eachother forgetting time 
Tangled, breathing, understanding
into the vortex so soft and clear
Laughing, blissfull - easy are we
giving what are bodies and  souls
are demanding. Smiling
Bodies apart we become aware
watching as the sun shines through the trees.

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dahlusion commented on Autumn Love


sweet, simply sweet. bravo!!! peace and light, dah

bforibus commented on Autumn Love


just a simple moment that speaks volumes of emotions. all the energy from the surroundings the characters. its a wonderfully chaotic dance of beautiful dots. another great job on this one



Ty so much

bluewolf commented on Autumn Love


A romantic getaway from the stress of the world-this poem reminded me of my mother and step-father. True love can withstand the test of time..



ty Bluwolf for reading and coment this was last year my husband and I stayed a week in a cottage at the ocean - it was wonderful

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Zenwitchfaery’s Poems (12)

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Magick Returns Or Mabon 1
Missing The Moon 3
Keep Your Darkness 13
Broken 3
Samhian 2
Sedona Morning 4
A Prayer To The World 2
The Poem 5
Autumn Love 3
The Doubt Monster 7
Planting Belladonna In The Moonlight 3
Johnathon 2