Autumn Love

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Autumn Love

Lay me down in the autumn leaves
amongst the forest of the trees.
your body is so warm against mine
as we fall so easliy into
eachother forgetting time 
Tangled, breathing, understanding
into the vortex so soft and clear
Laughing, blissfull - easy are we
giving what are bodies and  souls
are demanding. Smiling
Bodies apart we become aware
watching as the sun shines through the trees.

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dahlusion commented on Autumn Love

09-15-2010

sweet, simply sweet. bravo!!! peace and light, dah

bforibus commented on Autumn Love

10-13-2009

just a simple moment that speaks volumes of emotions. all the energy from the surroundings the characters. its a wonderfully chaotic dance of beautiful dots. another great job on this one

Zenwitchfaery

10/14/2009

Ty so much

bluewolf commented on Autumn Love

10-13-2009

A romantic getaway from the stress of the world-this poem reminded me of my mother and step-father. True love can withstand the test of time..

Zenwitchfaery

10/13/2009

ty Bluwolf for reading and coment this was last year my husband and I stayed a week in a cottage at the ocean - it was wonderful

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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