baby u r

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    baby u r

    my sunny sky
    my favorite high
    my bed so warm
    my port in storm
    my sweetest gift
    my emotional left
    my best friend
    until the end
    my in spiration
    my distionnation, my shining light
    my day and night my heart healer
    my anger chiller my pain reliever
    my spring fever my gem so rar
    my answered prayer, my heart and soul
    my life made whole, my merrt go around
    my up when iam down , my best chance
    my last dance my best shot
    my sweet thought, my morning sun
    my evening fun my dance partner
    my hearts gardener my source of laughter
    my everafter
    my heaven sent for who im ment
    my burning fire ,
    my greastest disire my soul mate my sweet fate
    my dream lover my before all after
    my conifindence
    my common sence
    my reason why
    until i die
    just in case you didnt know...............

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    lastyl commented on baby u r

    09-14-2010

    beautiful write, very nice rhythm and flow to it. Enjoyed it very much!!

    poeticmike22 commented on baby u r

    03-12-2010

    Ohhh wow what a beautiful poem. Im so lifted by this youre amazing. Angelbaby keep it up sweety

    mistervee commented on baby u r

    06-30-2009

    This is a very beautiful poem. You've expressed your feelings well. I like the flow of it.

    wildpendigus commented on baby u r

    06-10-2009

    I like this poem also, it also shows how much talent you have, it could be a song with a possible hit potential so keep writing as they practice makes perfect, so I see how hard you are striving to be the best. Congratulations ! grecowong@yahoo.com

    Chrisjan commented on baby u r

    05-29-2009

    Awesomely well written poem. Your words keep forming to make a whole story..... Unknown ending, excellent. Thanks for sharing.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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