Babygirl

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  • Happiness

    Babygirl
    I received the best gift one winter
    In my world she is the center

    I may not have given birth to her
    But she is what I live my whole life for

    She is my angel with so much love
    My tears for a child were sent to GOD above

    She healed my heart with just one smile
    For my babygirl I will walk that extra mile

    The pain in my heart has been freed
    This little girl is just what i need

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    edb6163 commented on Babygirl

    06-06-2009

    I like your poem. The poem provides a sentiment shy of sentimentality. The end-rhymes are a little forced but overall I enjoyed the write. You are a good writer. Keep them coming!
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    WordSlinger commented on Babygirl

    04-01-2009

    Awe, I read your other poem , so congradulations, :)
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    tinybutmighty85

    11/20/2010

    Don't have a child of my own

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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