Balance

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Balance

The equality of distribution

is life's absolute solution.

We need to give as well as take.

Otherwise it is to high-stake.

 

Coexist in harmony and unity

is survival of humanity without impunity.

Rich or poor laws of nature apply.

Without balance we will surely die.

 

If we only take and never look back,

we will have a hold on an empty sack.

Clean air and water hold our foundation.

Also, holds keys for survival of all creation.

 

Chained together in links of life,

disrespecting nature will cut like a knife.

Should. we indeed bleed her veins dry?

Its laws, all your money can't buy.

 

We are as strong as our weakest link.

Replant our trees so air doesn't stink.

Be kind to pollinating honey bees.

We need to repay our just fees!

 

 

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Tempestlady commented on Balance

08-01-2013

NICE ECOLOGICALLY AWARE POEM. LOVE THE FINANCIAL TWIST. THE CAUSE AND EFFECT OF IT ALL. YOU PUT IT NICELY. WRITE ON..................TEMPESTLADY

GentleT

08/03/2013

Thank you tempestlady for your kind comment.

Olan01 commented on Balance

10-12-2010

I like this; we have similar views. I wrote a poem called "Golden Rule" along the lines of this theme; I also wrote "Balance?" a haiku about the earth and human imbalance with her. Good job and Congrats. Dwell in love, peace and freedom, Olan

angel33614 commented on Balance

07-26-2010

This poem is pure brilliance, bravo! A message that is spoken with such crystal clear perfection yet I shed a tear in mourning for I know all to well your words fall upon deaf ears and ignorant minds for most. If only we could learn from our mistakes, if only we could break free from the cycle of destruction. The earth has been here for millions of years in perfect balance with nature and all the creatures upon it till we came along and ravaged and pundered and stabed our dear mother in the very breast of her heart, so sad. I only hope we awaken from the illusion before we find that the light at the end of the tunnel was nothing but a mirage... perhaps I see, perhaps i am blind. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka The poem buster

samuelj commented on Balance

09-23-2009

The greed of mankind has got to understand all you've put forth in this poem....Gods law is the law as it never changes like mans law.......I really really love this write it's something I would certaintly write myself.....sincere words

stellar commented on Balance

09-23-2009

this poem is very witty....like it so much...it's an advocacy towards loving nature sealed in this very witty and beautiful poem

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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