Base

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    • KAWK
    • Thinking about writting a new poem about strength

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    This is what childhood is like It It is like a base.It is the structure in which you must follow to survive.And till you are grown you understand that that base is now your token because you have grown and become a person of eternal life.

    Base

     Wow how do you feel
    When the base of you is all wrong
    How the tone is forever long
    But you tend to be alone

    For the base of you is wrong
    But what makes is right
    Is it you willingness to fight
    Or is it no longer your right

    For the Base of you is wrong
    But because your base is wrong
    You now become strong
    Is your base singing the same song

    Or is it forever wrong
    The Base of you has left you weak
    You can't speak
    But your voice tends to leak

    So Have you fixed your base
    Or is it broken
    Or has the one above spoken
    My Base is now a token

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    killingP13 commented on Base

    12-16-2010

    you really put your heart into every word...very well done :)
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    Alliyahj3 commented on Base

    07-20-2009

    this is great work, you wright fom deep inside and not many people do that any more. the words seem to catch me with each lin one at a time!!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me!
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    TwistedAce commented on Base

    07-20-2009

    I must say very interesting read. I like how you think
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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