Be Okay

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Be Okay

Eat, babe, eat something.
Don't treat yourself this way.
You can't go on forever.
Please.
For me.
Eat lunch.
Eat breakfast.
I dont care,
just eat!
I cant stand to see you
doing this to yourself.
I cry when I think about it.
I read into it
so fucking much.
Promise me you'll be okay.
At least for today.

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angelchaser commented on Be Okay

02-05-2011

If you had told me you were 20 and not twelve, based only on your poetry, I would have believed you:)

brokenhearted11

02/05/2011

aw, thanks! haha i should do that one day xD but this is hardly a poem at all.

angelchaser

02/05/2011

Honey, you need to stop putting your poetry down, you deserve much credit to write as well as you do at only 12 yrs of age.

brokenhearted11

02/05/2011

look, i know some of my new stuff is good. but this isnt.

angelchaser

02/05/2011

Yes it is, honey. Your comment about this poem is why I wrote "brokenhearted11 :her poetry" so there :P

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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