Beach Dance

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  • Fantasy

    Beach Dance

    A rare spark that flew
    and it was then that i knew

    you and i could last a life time
    i could help walk you through the pleasure and pain of life

    and you could hold my hand and tell me its alright

    This has not sex just a gain of minds
    dancing in the sands of time
    listen as the ocean comes near
    playing our melody
    loud enough for us to hear.


    swaying to our own groove
    tapping to our own sway
    wish life and dreams could always be this way

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    bforibus commented on Beach Dance

    03-24-2009

    very good write. sounds like a big time crush

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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