Beans

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    Beans

     Its like a mandolins laser beam pierced straight through my mind into my dreams. Showing me we are dumb to our capabilities ,bending space and time aint no fucking thing. But some people know like a government conspiracy, from tips and tricks they found through history. Now I'm trying to tell you things you won't believe cause the good book is cloaked by black and white sheets. All these sheep thats all they see a comfortable feeling for you and me. There is more to life then praying on your knees. Its about scientific facts and mathematical theories and seeing through your blind eye thats the real key like the E=MC. A lot of people in time had special genes Da vinci ,Einstein and Jesus Christ oh please. Not
    the son of god just a spiritual being. Just the way the mandolin showed me in my dreams but nows about that time that things come to a end like this stupid fucking poem from my illiterate head so if u have any questions debates or suggestions email me and find out things i should never mention.. 


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    knight4696 commented on Beans

    02-18-2010

    Glub - Quite the interesting read. Raw and powerful in it's presentation. The flow is good and the subject matter ... well ...interesting. :) Nice work. Ken
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    dumplin commented on Beans

    10-31-2009

    interesting scattered thoughts. there's a grammatical error or two in this, but I think it's a style thing for you, so I won't count it against you. Nice work, raw emotion duly noted.
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    bforibus commented on Beans

    10-29-2009

    very interesting. showing that the world is turning into a bunch of souless dronees. i love the raw feeling yo put into this poem. great job.
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    koolmom0 commented on Beans

    10-27-2009

    Interesting twist on things. I think you wrote this rather well. Koolmom
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    MarionYost commented on Beans

    10-27-2009

    I Like it... Got anymore??? All the best -Marion-
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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