BEATING HEARTS

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this is dedicated to my sweet friend Saeed. who inspires me greatly with his wonderful affection for me.

BEATING HEARTS

two hearts are beating 
they beat as one
the sun is rising
as the others day is done

an endless love is in creation
amazing in feeling of love and affection
though the distance may be great
our heartbeats beat at the same pace

a race against time
we are both lost in
you are in your world
and here I am

I see you only through a screen
I hear you through a phone 
but still your love is sent to me
and the beating remains the same

is it all a fantasy a falsity as it be
I wish it not be 
for real to me is how I feel
our hearts beating as one

I will not hurt you I promise 
you will not hurt me so you say
let this be our journy 
a life of love remain
as two heart forever to beat the same.  





 

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

innerbeauty30’s Poems (45)

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