Beautiful Dreamer at Bay

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  • BigDaddyCash
  • To achieve success in anything you need to start with a dream. Know your dream. Know why you are doing what you are doing. Create the fire that's needed to connect you with your dream. Create the passion you need in your pursuit of success. Create a desire to reach your achievements. Success can be yours if you have the courage to try..May your wishes all come true and they can it's all up to you

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Beautiful Dreamer at Bay, I composed as a song, the melody I play on the harmonica was written to fit the words. 
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Beautiful Dreamer at Bay

Beautiful dreamer invade my slumbering night.

Creations of beauty enhancing my mind sight.


Lovers of many years past envisioned in my memory.


Broken hearts restored in the mind set of clemency.


Moments of loveliness compete with adversity.


Tracing the illusion of peace and tranquility,


Doves fly in harmony with Scavengers of the night.


Beautiful dreams in harmony with purest delight.


Beautiful dreamer envision life in blue rhapsodies,


On the beaches where sand castles are a daily activity,


Dreaming each moment of everlasting proclivity


Steadfastness defaulting any memories of Hostility.


Beautiful dreams keeping me from losing my sanity,


In a world of confusion, delusion and catastrophe.


Beautiful dreamer keep all my tears and fears at bay,


And when I awake tomorrow it will be a better day.

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ss29angel commented on Beautiful Dreamer at Bay

11-03-2009

"Beautiful Dreamer at Bay" is the product of a wonderful mind. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

BigDaddyCash

11/03/2009

Thank you Angel, you make me blush a little but I sure love to be noticed. LOL, BDC

dancinghawk commented on Beautiful Dreamer at Bay

10-31-2009

dreamtime is no small thing ... there's a sense of acceptance of all that has been and a true courage with the recognition of true fear ... a gentle request, a sense of appreciation ... gratitude ... lovely post ... -dh

BigDaddyCash

11/12/2009

Thank you, I have written two more verses and a chorus to this song. I hope to get my new recording published. I’ve played it on my guitar for my friends and they like it so I’m keeping my fingers crossed.

wildflowerseeds commented on Beautiful Dreamer at Bay

10-31-2009

Beautiful dreamer indeed. very nice, allthough as peace and tranquility may be an illusion also suffering and strife.I also very much appreciated your letter to your brother, it is in our accepetance of our own responsability that we can begin to understand our own cappacity to create peace within. Well Done friend

BigDaddyCash

11/12/2009

My brother had so much talent to give to humanity. When he took his life I not only lost a brother the world lost a great man.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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