Beautiful Mistakes

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  • icarus0580
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I'm also a songwriter. This is a lyric i wrote in 2005 for the American Idol songwriting contest. I got the original idea for the fortune in a fortune cookie which read.."You can't have a beautiful ending, without first making beautiful mistakes".... to me, that was just a poem/song waiting to be written

Mike

Beautiful Mistakes

Life is full of mysteries
Take you where you've never been
Some will shed their skin for you
And let you peer within
But some will never open up
THey'll just lead your heart astray
until that day you realize
You've lost some time along the way

But I know that you can get there
And at times your heart may break
How can you have a beautiful ending
Without making beautiful mistakes

There's times you'll sit and wonder
How you've gotten where you are
You lost the path that was given you
When you wished upon a star
In time the way will be made clear
And you'll be on your way
but don't forget those misteps you took
That brought you to this day

'Cause I know that you can get there
And at times your heart may break
How can you have a beautiful ending
Without making beautiful mistakes

So take the high road
When you can
Don't be afraid to take those chances
And you will find yourself
Where you want to be
Where the dream of your future dances

So don't wonder how you'll get there
Cause life won't come to find you
Take some time and search your mind
For that feeling that reminds you
Of the dreams that you've been dreaming
Of the life you long to live
Remember all of the memories
And the times you've had to give

And I know that you can get there
And at times your heart may break
How can you have a beautiful ending
Without making beautiful mistakes

Copyrite 2005 Michael Faltyn

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Tinytree commented on Beautiful Mistakes

01-28-2010

This is beautiful. It explains it all so well. If only we could remember this at the time we are make the mistakes. :-) Thank you for sharing your work. You are gifted.

Mareann commented on Beautiful Mistakes

10-22-2009

Absolutely beautiful poem, well written, and well received. I would be honored if you would post this on my website. http://mareannspoetry.ning.com you are a very gifted artist, thanks you for sharing, Mareann

Charlie23 commented on Beautiful Mistakes

08-27-2009

I really like this write! My favorite is the last two lines, which you worked in a few times! Excellent message!

icarus0580

08/27/2009

Thank you for you kind comments. The last two lines are the key to this write.. Pretty much means that you are the result of all you've been through..

GentleT commented on Beautiful Mistakes

08-25-2009

Nice words to remind us no one is perfect and life is a learning process. Hopefully we learn and become stronger people.

icarus0580

08/27/2009

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. That is exactly the message of this write.

blackshadow commented on Beautiful Mistakes

08-22-2009

very nice as i read i kept thinking back of all the mistakes along the way now to find i wouldnt be here without those mistakes my day and future is brighter now thank you for that peice.

icarus0580

08/24/2009

That is basically the whole premise of this piece. We are where we are because we either succeeded or failed along the way. The results of those actions brigs us to where we are now...Thank you for your kind comments. If you'd car to hear the music, I can send the link.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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