Beautiful women walking

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    Beautiful women walking

    Beautiful women walking

    down the street

    causing men to look

    into your eyes down to your feet

    this beauty burns with a radiant glow

    the one who looks the most

    with glee is the one that takes you home

    you cause him to fall to his knees

    this wasn’t built for men to share

    only the one who ask for your hand

    and they said I do

    for the rest of my days

    I call you beautiful

    as this is what you are

    no one can share this place with you

    your mine forever more

    until I can’t talk

    just to let you know

    you mean the world to me

    and nothing else matters in this life without you

    with me

    we will grow old together

    that’s all we need to know

    love each other

    till we can’t

    walk or

       move.

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    FadedWhyspers commented on Beautiful women walking

    08-17-2009

    I love the sense of earthlt possession in this and also the sense of what more is implied, the faith behind this is amazing!

    Tempy commented on Beautiful women walking

    08-16-2009

    this makes me smile. its so cute yet strikingly commanding with a sense of jelosy. cute

    blackshadow

    08/16/2009

    thank you i have read some of your i am totaly amazed how talented you are keep up the good work

    Tempy

    08/16/2009

    Thankyou too :)

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