Beautiful

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    Beautiful

    Beautiful…its what you make in everything you do
    Please one, but please all
    All cannot be what we want it to be,
    A path is taken in life, and then it ventures
    It can lead to great becoming, but can lead to sad ending
    Keep what is close to the heart and make it happen
    When you look closer, it will happen
    It is in the soul, and heart that makes it there, or lost
    Many cannot see either; that’s the one who sees nothing
    They have no inner soul to shine through; to give
    When this happens; it gives nothing!

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    destiny57 commented on Beautiful

    05-23-2009

    so beautiful.very touching.really makes you think about life.where you are going and where you have been.

    kaleo55 commented on Beautiful

    03-20-2009

    A selfless act. Well done

    tiff290 commented on Beautiful

    03-16-2009

    i love this poem!! nice work!

    Phoenix9 commented on Beautiful

    02-09-2009

    so true, good message good write

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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