Because of You

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  • Existence
    • Amber041792
    • Keep your eyes open, you don't want to miss anything.

    Because of You

    I go to school.
    I live at home.
    I am normal just like everyone else.
    The problem is that no one notice me.
    I am invisible to everyone.
    Guys at school walk all over me.
    My parents don't acknowledge me like i don't exist.
    I like it that way though.
    No one to give me any crap.
    Until one day you came along.
    You bumped into me just like everyone else,
    but you actually said "sorry".
    That is when some really noticed me.
    When you seen me and looked into my eyes.
    Now I do exist.
    I am alive because of you.

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    charles52 commented on Because of You

    12-27-2009

    Nice job of setting up the reader over your lonely life to then find the one that will bring happiness. It only takes one person to make us feel alive. Your poem did a great job of making that point. Thanks for sharing.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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