Because of you

9 Comments

Poem Commentary

I'd like to think that we could make someone feel just a little better if we offer a smile, a gestor it will be okay.
A little piece of mind. The thought someone out there cares. When our house burned  down we lost everything. Not that long ago, a friend put a smile on my face. We had our lives, our memories. It will be okay. We lost our best two little friends our pugs. With a broken heart we made it through. With a hug and a smile. It will be okay. God bless people like that.

Because of you

There is a smile on my face
Every time you walk by
It softens my troubled heart
Brings joy to my soul
Happiness fills the air
My troubles are forgotten
If only for a moment
You are a very special
Brought into my life
You remind me it will be alright
A hand shake a hug  brightens my day
Reminds me how much you care
Trials  can disrupt our day  
When I look at you it reminds me
To keep the  smile on my face
Who knows who I might see
I just might make their day

Poem Comments

(9)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Teardrops commented on Because of you

12-09-2009

wonderful poem thanks for letting me read it nice write

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

Thank you I am glad you liked it.

SILKYTWEED commented on Because of you

12-09-2009

Beautiful Write....very simple but profoundly cheerful....Thanks for sharing!

Bettysrainbow48

12/12/2009

THANK YOU CHeck out he bug

Bettysrainbow48

12/12/2009

THANK You

bloomingsun commented on Because of you

12-08-2009

The love of a friend can brighten any day, lighten any load... It's the things you can't see that matter most, and that can't be taken away. God bless...

Bettysrainbow48

12/12/2009

THANK YOU SO Much

HarverTomsson commented on Because of you

12-08-2009

People are more important than things. You have a wealth within that many never will know. God bless you, HT

Bettysrainbow48

12/12/2009

YOU GOT THAT RIGHT CHECK OUT THE BUG

WinterFrost commented on Because of you

12-08-2009

They say if you make yourself be happy you will be happy. I'm not so sure of that but a smile usually gets smiles back. Be happy and do good work Winter

Bettysrainbow48

12/12/2009

Thank you so much check out the bug

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

Bettysrainbow48’s Poems (74)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Think of Me 4
Sit down with me 19
That Look 15
In A Moment 18
Peek a Boo 14
The Oceans Secret 14
Fish in a bowl 15
Corn Stocks and Summer 11
The Snake 17
Gone Fishing 14
I Can't 16
A BOX 16
Just A tree 13
Change 6
You left me 9
The Lion Sleeps 5
Something about you 7
Motivation 10
Close your eyes 12
Hunger 10
The Thunder Roared 10
And Jesus said 12
It all starts again 8
Blue 6
Take me back 4
It's Valentines Day 15
From A Distance 14
Take My Hand 3
He Barked 5
Arthur 3
THE GOOLDEN DAYS 3
She Danced 11
From within the wall 16
You left 13
Elusive Memories 9
People like you 27
The Burning in my soul 9
The Night Moon 12
A picture within a picture 4
The first face 6
In a clouded mist 3
It was September 5
Babble Beneath The Wind 7
My Darling 3
The Rose 7
My Valentine 9
In the depths of mind 5
MY Song 3
Daddys Eyes 8
The Bug 12
Because of you 9
ALL I WANT FOR CHRISTMAS 8
DEAR GOD 9
IN MY SADNESS 2
ENOUGH 6
TAKING MY BREATH AWAY 11
I LOVE YOU 2
I'M NOT GONE 4
STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT 4
DIVORCE 2
The Willow Weeps 5
The Empitness within 2
My Computer 3
Running out of time 1
My Sprit 3
If you could see through my window 3
My Door 2
Where there is a way 2
Everyday is the same 4
Empty Arms 5
When The Sun Sets- 6
Halloween 2
Dragon Fly 14
Halloween 4