Because of You

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My very first poem. Hope you like it:)

Because of You

Because of you i'm nothing but a shell
You left me hollow and broken.
Because of you, i'm going to burn in hell
Because of you i cried for days
Because of you i moved away
Because of you, for me, there is no tomorrow
Because of you, I shot myself
and now you're drowning in sorrow
Because of you, i'm dead,
Today i wouldn't be,
If u hadn't said goodbye
To me

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Ninjaboy commented on Because of You

02-18-2011

no words can define this one, atleast none i can think of................................10 here

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