Before I Close My Eyes

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    Before I Close My Eyes

    Tonight I sleep,

    With hopes of soothing dreams

    And calm waves of peace.

    Tomorrow I will wake,

    With luck,

    To a day filled with laughter

    Joy,

    Another passing of the hours

    As we struggle to make true

    the visions from our rest.

    I ask not for mine,

    But for the hopes of the three who hold my heart.

    May all that they see while they sleep come true.

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Before I Close My Eyes

    07-06-2010

    pretty good! now im gonna add a bunch of randomness to make it long enough! i like pickles. how tall is YOUR fluffy thingamajig? mmk i think its long enough now :) keep writing :)8
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