before

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before

the thunder before the lightning
the laugh before the kiss
the dream before the action
the proof before the lie
the truth before i die
the wind before the crash
the rain before the flowers
the time before you leave
the wedding before the kiss
the dance before the end
the day before the night
the start before our end
the day before the night
the sun before the stars
the hug before your gentle kiss
the i love you before the i do
the start before our end....
let this be the start and
not our very end
fore how much i love you
even if you don't have a clue

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simoneaugustus commented on before

08-20-2010

This comes very close to being a perfect example of 'anaphora.' I wonder if you knew of this style already or if you happened upon it and just liked the flow of it? Either way, it was full of beautiful imagery and some very poignant thoughts. Excellent write!

poetrygirl95

09/04/2010

i just happened apon it!

WordSlinger commented on before

06-03-2010

I can agree with all of this, thank you........ WS

786mona commented on before

05-23-2010

i love this poem! it is a great one...wow! good job and 10 for u!

poetrygirl95

05/24/2010

Thanks

alb29oclfl commented on before

05-23-2010

nice flow and rhythm, each leading to the next, well done impressive style

courage commented on before

04-26-2010

I really like the style you chose to write this poem. I think it is a keeper!

poetrygirl95

05/06/2010

thanks thats alwats been my writting style

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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