Began to move on

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  • Forgiveness

    Began to move on
    As a child I struggled with believing in myself, having confidence in being no one else.
    They say in order to move forward you must forgive. I guess you have to, if you want to live. Live your life and all it's possibilities.
    Clear the air and whether the storm with old fashion remedies
    Life is joyous, and can bring wonderful things,
    Be all you can be and follow your goals and dreams
    There's nothing worse than leaving an empty scene
    Showing kindness for every human being
    If life was bad, then make it good
    Sometimes it's a pleasure being misunderstood
    So open your heart, and forgive everyone that has done you wrong
    Another year is approaching so began to move on

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    Ceasar commented on Began to move on

    11-04-2009

    Again-Wo-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo-o-o-w! You really have a gift. And what you said about forgiving if you want to live-that really caught my attention-in order to live life free from unneeded worries and pains, you must forgive. Unforgiveness is like a weight that holds you down in life-it keeps you stagnated-not able to completely move forward in life, so in order to flow freely through life, forgive, and live.
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    CasimirJash commented on Began to move on

    08-09-2009

    love your poem, its very inspirational, self-confidence is what gives me courage to write what I feel without hesitation. nice poem
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    cmlestrade commented on Began to move on

    08-08-2009

    I am reading such inspirational poetry today. Another affirmation of being good and forgiving and just serving up the milk of human kindness. This is well though out and well written. Good word choice and no sloppy sentimentality. You've done it again.
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    Niecy commented on Began to move on

    02-16-2009

    Great read, real life captivates & paints truth with every situation. Read all three & I sense an author on the horizon?/! God Bless!
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    VLyric1 commented on Began to move on

    01-15-2009

    Beautiful poem and very inspirational!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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