Believe

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  • Lost Love

    Believe

    what is happening to the love we shared
    was it stupid of me to think you cared
    I've memorized your face, i know your touch by heart
    i spend all day dreaming of where you are
    but now it's as if we are fading away
    it takes the sunshine out of my day
    to know that you are not next to me
    if only you could truly believe

    All I know is that i fell in love with someone who's no longer there
    All I know is that i fell in love with someone who i thought cared
    Why are you changing, why are you going, why are you leaving me
    All I know is that you were the one who made me believe

    Every where i turn i see you
    you follow me just like i want you to
    but then i realize that your just in my mind
    with all these faces you i just cannot find
    still in the crowd but now i'm falling down
    all the tears i leave will make me drown
    i reach out my hand but no one's there
    cant you understand i thought you cared

    no i'm here alone, where are you
    just want you home, don't know what to do
    have you forgotten me, so easily
    lost and broken, now i finally see

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    WhiteKnight commented on Believe

    06-02-2009

    good song. how long did it take you to write it. i try and it takes me forever to do it. want to hear one? i have a really cool name for a band if i get one. wanna hear it? Ryan

    babyfire04 commented on Believe

    05-14-2009

    your poem is good. Def. heartfelt. I would suggest a little more puncutuation to break up your lines. Overall great job.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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