Beneath These Still Blue Waters

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    Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    Nestled within,
    snuggling against
    the forest arms
    lays the perfect escape.
    Walls lift high,
    enshrouding them to care.
    Flowing down
    the music of clear blue water-
    soothing and refreshing
    against the skin.
    Dive beneath the mirrored glass
    and just below the surface
    look up to the sky-
    image misted over,
    distinction illusive;
    free from illusion's destructive mind-
    escape from you life-
    flee from this
    and break the bonds,
    so simple it seems-
    escape from reality.
    Stand beneath the cascading stream,
    the liquid washing away-
    leaving want of care.
    Breath deeply the mystical waters-
    healing waters,
    make your wish;
    lift your arms
    and step into
    the freedom to dream
    within the mind,
    and for a moment,
    feel free of time.

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    MarionYost commented on Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    10-19-2009

    Nice. wow. man, such a different perspective.. I love this, Thanks for your feedback . All the best -Marion-

    inkmaster commented on Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    10-14-2009

    Very well written I understand where you are comming from, enjoyed the read..........inkmaster

    teasasue commented on Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    09-15-2009

    I love this one, it took me away with it, you make magic with yoour words, I love the feelings I get by reaing your poems, thank you

    jacque2sweet commented on Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    09-14-2009

    As I read this piece I felt as though I was dreaming. Your choice of words was so descriptive and precise I could almost feel and see the surroundings, yet I could feel a hint of mystique. Kyma63

    wolfnomad commented on Beneath These Still Blue Waters

    09-14-2009

    I thought you dscribed the peaceful setting perfectly.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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