Betrayal

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Betrayal

There was a time when things were new,

I thought That I could believe in you.

You spoke of love and tenderness,

I use to love your sweet caress.

I took the words you spoke to heart,

As you had promised we'd never part.

Time went by and things had changed,

My hopes my dreams you rearranged.

I put aside the ones so dear,

as days went by I'd shed more tears.

I'd beg and plead to get your love,

I'd pray to myself and the lord up above.

There wasn't an answer from the prayers I had said,

I should have known then that our love was dead.

I continued to hope our love would return,

and relight and ember from which our love burned.

There is no more hope, no dream of desire,

Of ever rekindling that once raging fire.

I've left and I've grown, and I'll never return,

To a love that's gone dead and embers won't burn.

The betrayals to much I can never go back,

It was love that I hungered and love that I lacked.

It's goodbye forever no more tears will I shed,

I'm happy and free and I'm rejoicing instead.

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jkingz commented on Betrayal

08-18-2009

Bravo! Bravo! Excellente! I love it from the first to the last line. I love where you said i've left and i've grown, i will never return! Life is a bitch just b strong. Great concept though

Shadowwalker

08/22/2009

Ty so much for you comment. It's all true. Left and never looked back.

GentleT commented on Betrayal

05-31-2009

Yip-pee, I'll rejoice too. So proud that you took back your life and are strong enough to move in a positive direction.

Shadowwalker

06/18/2009

That's all one can do when betrayed. TY

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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