Betrayed

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Betrayed

    Life let down
    Nothing left
    Demon inside
    No-one can help

    Holy water
    Burns though my skin
    Un-imaginable pain
    Destruction within

    War has been waged
    with all who defend me..
    Affliction has set
    no-one befreind me..

    Im a soul lost to torment..
    torture
    and lies..
    Nothing seems clear
    when controled in your life..

    Thrashing and screaming
    my body on fire..
    I can hear people laughing
    But my only Desire..
    To cut the throat of the beast
    and pluck the eyes from the lier..

    We'll see what you say when i set you on fire!

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    optimistic commented on Betrayed

    07-01-2009

    you pulled thru a roller coaster of fire on this one the line torture must really mean something to you important being that it is marked by it self. Great ending with a free fire for all.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Betrayed

    07-01-2009

    the scorn and the anger really burns in this. i wrote a poem a while back but didnt post it the last line was" to drench you in gasoline and set you on fire" classic

    mdaffron commented on Betrayed

    04-28-2009

    This is the best poem i have ever read haha except some of mine

    sovinto commented on Betrayed

    03-11-2009

    outstanding,

    dahlusion commented on Betrayed

    03-10-2009

    Powerful anger with a twist of laughing triumph.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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