Betrayed

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Betrayed

    Life let down
    Nothing left
    Demon inside
    No-one can help

    Holy water
    Burns though my skin
    Un-imaginable pain
    Destruction within

    War has been waged
    with all who defend me..
    Affliction has set
    no-one befreind me..

    Im a soul lost to torment..
    torture
    and lies..
    Nothing seems clear
    when controled in your life..

    Thrashing and screaming
    my body on fire..
    I can hear people laughing
    But my only Desire..
    To cut the throat of the beast
    and pluck the eyes from the lier..

    We'll see what you say when i set you on fire!

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    optimistic commented on Betrayed

    07-01-2009

    you pulled thru a roller coaster of fire on this one the line torture must really mean something to you important being that it is marked by it self. Great ending with a free fire for all.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Betrayed

    07-01-2009

    the scorn and the anger really burns in this. i wrote a poem a while back but didnt post it the last line was" to drench you in gasoline and set you on fire" classic

    mdaffron commented on Betrayed

    04-28-2009

    This is the best poem i have ever read haha except some of mine

    sovinto commented on Betrayed

    03-11-2009

    outstanding,

    dahlusion commented on Betrayed

    03-10-2009

    Powerful anger with a twist of laughing triumph.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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